Scene #1 Enter First minor league try? comments please?

Question: Scene #1 Enter First minor league try!? comments please!?

Scene #1 Enter

In the quiet night of home
rushing in the back door
like the north wind
"Honey I'm home
Hellooooo"
"Welcome
I'm here
I hear you
whistling, loud and clear
winter snow is deep, soup's hot!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Are you working on some kind of play or just reading!? Well reading it I'd say it's a heck of away to make a entrance!. Cheery inspite of the snowy, windy weather!. We should all be so cheery!. ERRROOF!Www@QuestionHome@Com

First minor league try!? This is a nice snapshot of a familiar scene!. Maybe try on the last line "winter snow deep, but soup's hot!."Www@QuestionHome@Com