One more for the day, from my crazed muse. Will you read?

Question: One more for the day, from my crazed muse!. Will you read!?

OFF THE RADAR

Haven't seen me
in a while,
know I'm there,
smiling from the Earth,
jumping at the sound
of my voice!.

Hide in the
silhouette
of a face not mine;
breathe coveted
existence!.
Notice me, notice me,
like a cell phone
on vibrate!.

Thank you stranger,
putting flowers on granite!.
Thank you for knowing
I am lost,
but not gone;
faded,
but not forgotten!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

From whence did this spring!? This is excellent!. The first verse speaks as if you are here in body, alive in the World, but you have lost who you are, your personality - so lost and alone that even your own voice startles you!.

And whilst being lost you are desperate not to completely disappear (not sure of meaning of breathe coveted existence) but, you cannot call out, you are like a leaf swaying/trembling hoping to be noticed!.

But, then the last verse - !.
- a complete stranger is able to reach and touch you like putting flowers on an unkempt grave and in doing so, lets you know at least one person knows that you are still here!.

This is so poignant - I hope it isn't autobiographical!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a very unusual poem, the voice from the grave beseeching to be noticed and thanking a stranger for flowers!. It is a poem with pathos and has both clarity and an ethereal quality in its imagery!. I really love so many lines but I think me favorites are
Hide in the
silhouette
of a face not mine;
breathe coveted
existence!.
They are not only beautiful but make the meaning of the poem clear!. It is a wonderful poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it - especially

Notice me, notice me,
like a cell phone
on vibrate!.

The image is very clear of a spirit just wanting to be acknowledged - to validate their existence - to know that they can still reach the world of the living!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it very much!. a great poem of remembrance!. i like some of the metaphors you use!. you use some good words as well!. looks like something i would write i got a good one to post!. let me know what you think!. what am i writing about!. good free verse!. like to hear more of your poetry!. thanks!. peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm I'm trying to figure this one out!.!.Have you found yourself!? Is that what you are saying!? Or trying to find yourself!.!.!.Well you'll find yourself though the person you may find might be different than what they were before but that's not a bad thing!.!.!.Embrace the change and show her off!.!.hmmm there is wisdom buried somewhere in there!.!.!.maybe XDWww@QuestionHome@Com

very nice!.!.!.personally the cell phone reference didnt do it for me!. but thats just because i like poetry to have a timeless "classic" feel!. but i give it thumbs up!. good stuffWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like it,

u gave a comment on my song and thanks for critisam

u seem to add poetry on here at least twice a day how do u come up with the words that fastWww@QuestionHome@Com

An unusual approach but one that definately works!. "know that I'm there, smiling from the Earth!." really jumped out for it's image!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The very first poem I've read using modern technology as a simile!. As usual, you have been outstandingly creative!. I project that many will now follow your lead!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your poems!. I will always notice you!. Very Beautiful!.
You will never be forgotten!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pleas keep these newer ones open until tomorrow!.!.!. I am too tiered to answer now!.!.!. plus, slow computer!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com