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Question: Here is a light poem (as in undark)!. Do you like it!?
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What was her name!? It started with an ‘M’ I think!?
by TD Euwaite
Mona Lisa,
I have seen you
In a room brightened
By a charming and delightful
…contagious smile!.
Your words
Softly spoken
In chains clear and unbroken
…pondered thoughts!.
Moving near you
Wishful thinking
Known taboo
…scented air!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This poem is meaningful and beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
There is a hint of Matt Monro's Mona Lisa, Mona Lisa they have named you (was that deliberate!?)
I've stood in front the painting (in my teens) and thought -as teens do - Can't see what all the fuss is about!. I wonder what I would think now!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great image TD! consider "delightfully" instead of "delightful", but otherwise I think you did an outstanding job!.!.!.I was "there"!.
!.!.!.keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
The mystery of Mona, Some say it was the artist him self!
Do you think that is the cause of the smile, I wonder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Seriously, guys, this has some beautiful imagery and a message as well!. Put brain in motion before moving pen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
taboo!?
what's taboo anymore!?
fisting!? felching!? what!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Pondering Mona Lisa so early this morn!? Perhaps a candlelight dinner is brewing in your mind!. The poem paints the scene well!. Compliments to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
'Step away from that painting! You're inside the velvet ropes!'
*guard puts hand on gun*
'But occifer, the painters name is Coty!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful!
I think she definitely had a secret!.!.!.!.
Well said, Elaine! Words to live by!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice image your portraying!! BeautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com
Since I don't fancy 'dark', I do like it!.
Enigmatic lady, with Nat King Cole style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
yeah Beautiful!
keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is a really nice and visual poem and i loved it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow that's really well written! Really gives you the mental image!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I liked your poem today!. Lately you havn`t been so up beat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it!.!.!.no Love it ur really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com