Poem "Things i cant stand."?

Question: Poem "Things i cant stand!."!?

a few things i detest
like studying for a test
or only 600$ for a
economic stimulus check
other things i cant stand
are loud rock bands
dependency on oil in foreign lands
contract negotiations at work
when the real money only goes to one jerk
jealous and insecure people
that pay no mind to you when you drive a lemon
my venting is now coming to and end
cause the list is too big !.!.!.!.!.!.you cant even comprehend!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

far be it for me
to at your work scoff
but a little ol' hint:
your rhyme scheme is off

it sounds a little
like you're trying to rap
i liked the message, though
so a tip of my capWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol (good guy) that was funny!. the first poem was good, not really my tipe of poetry but it was good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like you should have gone to college!.!.!.maybe your life sucks a little, huh!?Www@QuestionHome@Com