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Question: Another Poem Please Be Honest!?
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23 year old boy
Send to jail
Send for life and
Sentenced to die
23 year old boy
Says he is innocent
He says that the others did it
Mom is crying
Mom is on her knees
Praying to God
To make this nightmare
Go away
To bring his boy back home and
To reunite her family again
23 year old boy
Has sleepless nights
Wishing he had listened to his mother
Wishing he made the right friends and
Wishing that he was home
Innocent
He is
He did no harm
He hurt no one
23 year old boy
Sees the light
The light of his new life
The light of his new beginning and
The light of his freedom
Innocent
23 year old boyWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It sounds like a song!. I love it!. I would pay you to let me use it for my band!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Might want to edit:

"Sent to jail!.!."
"Sent for life and!.!."

Good poem, but it'd be better as a tragedy!. (I'm guessing he lived)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem wasn't too bad but the 23 year old boy did do it!.!.!.he's lying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amazing I love it :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

good poem!. bad ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with Nezzie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree that it's a good poem but kinda a bad ending :( SorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

very good 2 thumbs upWww@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it =]Www@QuestionHome@Com