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Question: Another Poem Please Be Honest!?
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23 year old boy
Send to jail
Send for life and
Sentenced to die
23 year old boy
Says he is innocent
He says that the others did it
Mom is crying
Mom is on her knees
Praying to God
To make this nightmare
Go away
To bring his boy back home and
To reunite her family again
23 year old boy
Has sleepless nights
Wishing he had listened to his mother
Wishing he made the right friends and
Wishing that he was home
Innocent
He is
He did no harm
He hurt no one
23 year old boy
Sees the light
The light of his new life
The light of his new beginning and
The light of his freedom
Innocent
23 year old boyWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It sounds like a song!. I love it!. I would pay you to let me use it for my band!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Might want to edit:
"Sent to jail!.!."
"Sent for life and!.!."
Good poem, but it'd be better as a tragedy!. (I'm guessing he lived)Www@QuestionHome@Com
The poem wasn't too bad but the 23 year old boy did do it!.!.!.he's lying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Amazing I love it :]Www@QuestionHome@Com
good poem!. bad ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I agree with Nezzie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I agree that it's a good poem but kinda a bad ending :( SorryWww@QuestionHome@Com
very good 2 thumbs upWww@QuestionHome@Com
i liked it =]Www@QuestionHome@Com