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Versification…!.!.
That’s the name of the game
And each generation
Wants to point the blame
Grammatical notion
Working in reverse
Literary devotion
Can only make it feel worse

Communication…!.!.
Formatted Retourne
Let’s try an Acrostic
Take a chance at Tyburn
Syllablacally haiku
Or Senyu you can learn
Diamant-ification
It's gotta be your turn………!.

* Only the words have been changed to protect the innocentWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Jellz!.!.!.you are something else!! You manipulate words with the greatest of ease!.!.!.!. You just made my day!!

Great se-n-yu!!

TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, but you might think about changing "can only make it feel worse" and "it's gotta be your turn"!. "Can only make it feel worse" doesn't really make sense!. also, remember that you don't always have to rhyme all the words!. I think poems sound more developed if they don't always rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

So, does this mean you are diversifying!? Putting your nest eggs of words into forms such as senyru!? What no etheree!? And, no odes or sonnets!? What would poor William think!? A nice start to a fun poem!. Keep at it!. You started this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the poem is good!.!.!.it shows u hav a very good vocabulary!.!.!.!.i loved the 1st stanza very much !.!.!.its interesting!.!.!.!.!.!. but i really dint understand the 2nd stanza!.!.!.!.pls use simpler words!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I cant really understandWww@QuestionHome@Com