Is this poem any good??? please read and rate!?

Question: Is this poem any good!?!?!? please read and rate!!?

Summers Whisper
Lying on the lush green grass
Watching fluffy clouds pass lazily
Wasting time away
Warm air dancing across your face
Orange sun rays melt all thoughts
As nothing else seems to exist
A quiet breeze blows softly through the trees
Playful cries of young children
Ring sweetly through the sticky air
Time passes you by
Crickets chirp promises of better times
Shy deer watch you from a distance
As you dream the summer day away
All other thoughts pushed aside
Two blue birds sing sweetly on the branch above you
A song of hope
A song of peace
All the tears are washed away
By gentle summer rains
Lilac scented air breathes around your body
Engulfs your fears
Carries them away with the wind
This is summers gentle whisperWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

WOW! This is really awesome! From 1 to 10 it would have to be a smashing10!!!!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wha- wha- wha - dear !. wonderful-superb!.

it appears you are a great lover of nature!.remains so immersed that your poetic thoughts search and gets pearls, motis, diamonds in the nature in terms of birds leaves and flowers!. your vocabulary of nature is very impressive!.the best part is that it is full of hopes and is POSITIVE in nature
i love the poem from the core of my heart!.i wish you best of luckWww@QuestionHome@Com

it has a spiritual effect i felt warmth and tranquility, i am so impress from your lovely poem!. wish for you to keep writing this kind of meaningful poem!.
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Ok I request you,one thing!. You compose this poem and try singing it!. If you could do it, it's wornderful poem and if you could't then its beautiful thought as such!.

Many regards to your creativity,

VinayWww@QuestionHome@Com

luvely heading to being a poet
or copied from net
then u'll become annu malik all nusrat sahab song cpoied by himWww@QuestionHome@Com

You have use the poetic cliches like whisper, lush green,fluffy cloud, danging, quiet breeze etc!. Well!. I am not amused!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is an amazing poem!. If you wrote it I'm truly impressed
You have a deeper understand of life not many others can grasp!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a good poetic exercise!. You've stacked some very nice comparisons on your list!. It could be trimmed down a bit, but not bad, overall!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow it is just fantastic and i think u can be a good poet,Just try ur luck dear in poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com

hey this is a beautiful poem!.!.!.
n i'll surely rate atleast 4 for it!.!.!.!.
i really liked it!.!.!.n who has written it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good eco-friendly poem!.!.!. I have rated!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a lovely poem -can you set it to music !?Www@QuestionHome@Com

to much reading but sureWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like your poem very very very very muchhhhhh!.!.!.!.!.!.
i would give a 10 star
thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com