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Question: Journey this river!?
This River
From misty mountain darkness
the river of sorrow flows down
beneath awnings… forgotten tears
This river flowing
Men no longer venture forth
to walk along its barren banks
always flowing, ever moving
This river growing
No village safe in passing
for unknown bones lay witness to
and grieving grows with each mile more!.
This river knowing
Flowing ever flowing on
while people sleep beneath stones of gray
it carries no name except sorrow
This river …Www@QuestionHome@Com
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River of onward-traveling death!. And the rain of wars swells its banks!.!.!.pestilence, famine, disasters!. Oh so true!
Be not afraid!. You are a swimmer!.
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are you full of sorrow--have your heart been broken!.you have expressed your all pains and grief!. good catherases !. i hope after writing this you must have felt peace in your heart and intrisic bliss!.if yes pl!. do e-mail me so that i can check what i thought of it was rightWww@QuestionHome@Com
Outstanding!. Might have been written for the dead streams and rivers here!.!.!.pollution by the mining companies!. They will never recover; and the owners of the mines will not clean them up!. Wildlife has a difficult time finding fresh water!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Shall we gather at the river" (I'm humming)
movie, "A River Runs Through It"
Kudos! This poem takes me many places, personal and
so many books read etc!. my mind "overflows" heart too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful imagery and alliteration!. We all have taken, or
eventually will take this journey!. May it be done with friends supporting us in our travels!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love this poem and it needs the light of powerful thinking to peer down into its depths!. so i will sit and think a while on this!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I flow a lot, and I'm somewhat manly!.!.!.like at the end of Babe!.!.!.I've seen it a dozen times, still, the vindicated little pig swells me with pride!.!.!.TDWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is a very beautiful poemWww@QuestionHome@Com
Great feeling, I know this river!. Thanks for sharing, even before Amon Ra has sent rays to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
if i would rate it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.i would give u 8 ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com