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Question: Lats poem of the night!. Good bad or ugly!.!?
"dancing to the blue flame"


Blazing skies,
endless winter!.
On the throne,
the last pretendoer!.
A blast of rage!.
lives for your only pain!.
On top my dying dreams!.
My last time,
My soul dies like
wretched!.little childen,
his tie sells a mistake,
Wathing children on the
Cross!.
Cry in rar for
wraith of ego!.
Bleeeded are those
who eternaly bleed!.
I saw her come and
she clearly sighed!.
I feel no fear, no pain,
not afraid!.
A century of flames with the shaman died
Though furious days, take over my life,
Pain craves my life, life fades away!.!.!.
life dances away in blue flames,Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
BLEEDED ARE THOSE WHO ETERNALY BLEED!.''This
is fantastic, You`re ok in my book!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what can i say!? you already know!.

jenny 2

i look and i wonder
where jenny was sent
the postman has come
dropped the mail and went

the sun risen sky filled
the evening it set
and all of this happened
with no jenny yet

i look and i see
that my jenny has gone
the night came and passed us
and left us with dawn

the morning unfolded
its bright golden blues
and the wind whispers yes
we are just passing throughWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am a blue flame-wraith myself and it is good even when bad and even when it is ugly here it is beautiful within the fire!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

for once
a real poem
this too would be a poem
but i cant think of anything
that rhymes wirh poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like this, it calls about a fantasy mind set for me!.!.!.!. very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com