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Question: Love devine* a poem:) plz tell me wht you think!.!.!?
Looked each other in the eyes

With a smile on our faces

Meant for each other, love divine

Taking us to different places


He held my hand

Told me everything is going to be fine

I found someone that finally understands

The fear that I’ve been trying to hide


He gave me a kiss on the forehead

When I had those crazy migraines

He told me to lie on his chest

Saying everything is going to beat away


We understood each other

Just by looking at our eyes

We took our love a little further

Hoping it will stay aliveWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is my favorite of your poems so far, very hopeful and optimistic!. You have finally found true love, and someone who understand how you feel, and can take the pain away in a heart beat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The third paragraph is kinda wierd but its really cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

i thought is was great and i liked it ^^Www@QuestionHome@Com