Thy bosom rises and falls
as an ocean swell in gentle
proposal, when thou art sleeping!.
Thy subtle breathing, sighs
like that of a far distant sea;
hushed on some inaccessible shore!.
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as an ocean swell in gentle proposal, when thou art sleeping!. Thy subtle breathing, sighs like that of a far distant sea; hushed on some inaccessible shore!. RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Any poem as lovely as this deserves a beautiful and illuminating title!. This is very romantic and tender in meaning and imagery!. I envy the woman who so inspires you!. There is love in every word!. What do you think about the title "Hush"!? Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It doesn't necessarily require a title, but it certainly deserve one as Amy pointed out, and her suggestion of HUSH is also quite becoming for it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hushed swell Nice imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes !.Www@QuestionHome@Com |