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Question: Give me a minute to fiddle with this!.!.!.OK, is it right now!?
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Geom II
by TD Ewaite

I have a friend on an !.!.!.Island
A weekend with her…I
Breakwater Jetty……!.I…!.
Slipping out of………I…!.
The Channel………!.!.!.I…!.!.
Waterborne…………!.I……
You glide……………I……!.
Sailing………………I………
Along!.………………!.I………!.
Master waves she and I on her sloop
Sail
Move,
Commanding all that we see as we sail

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I looked for Geom and Poetry and came up with poetry for geometry -- so I'm missing something here!. I'm guessing from the format that you have to use the start letter to create an end bar on each line!. Excuse my lack of comprehension of the form!.

I like the poem!.

I have a friend on an !.!.!.Island
A weekend with her…!.I
Breakwater Jetty…!.…!.I…!.
Slipping out of……!.!.…I…!.
The Channel……!.!.…!.!.!.I…!.!.
Waterborne………!.!.!.!.!.!.I……
You glide………!.!.…!.…I……!.
Sailing…………!.…!.!.…I………
Along!.…………!.!.!.……!.I………!.
Master waves she and I on her sloop
Sail
Move,
Commanding all that we see as we sailWww@QuestionHome@Com

I can see it - wow - you've done this before!. I am dropping out of this one - I'm going away to sit with my dear husband and watch tv - like normal people do!. Bye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There's a beautiful breeze today, the sun is shining, Bay Gull wants to soar!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fiddle faddle, who needs a paddle, just breathe hard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I still don`t know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

All I have is a dinghy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like dat!.!.!.!.
I don' know how to do dat!.!.!.!.!.YET!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice sail boat!.!.Who's you friend on an island!? Hmmm, let me guess!. Could it be our lovely Elaine ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com