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Pseudo-Icarus
A real legacy
Of broken wings,
Shattered dreams,
And melting
Building it up
Just to watch if fall
Crumbling beneath flames
Was it ever built at all!?
A forever sky,
A short step down
At the end there would be
No diamond crown
The Heavens were not
The destination
Only the extent
Of inspiration
What can come
Of prosperity!?
Only tales and stories
To entertain posterity
But what is the result
Of falling fast!?
Only a swifter demise
And nothing to last
The sun-so great
An immense endeavor
Only challenged by
The intrepid and clever
Wax and feathers
The greatest allies
Malleable and light
Most visible to eyes
Both elements were formed
Into durable wings
Nimble and daring
Among other things
But alas!
The Achilles heel
No unmeltable wax
And no feathers of steel
An even truer legacy
Of phoenix risings-
The sun settled
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