Trying
Pleasing
Caring
Loving
The moments are trying, pleasing one,
To live with out caring, loving none!.
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Pleasing Caring Loving The moments are trying, pleasing one, To live with out caring, loving none!. TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: My Sis Poet Lover Writer Wordsmith As a poet she is a lover As a writer she is a wordsmithWww@QuestionHome@Com You got it again! A Tyburn poem is a unique form of poem, consisting of 6 lines!. Its structure depends on using syllables in a specific way!. The first four lines must consist of 2 syllable words and the last two lines must consist of 9 syllables: 2,2,2,2,9,9 syllables!. Have a try and enjoy it! Write the first four lines!. 1-- The first through fourth lines are 2 syllable words that describe whatever your poem is about!. They all have to be different, and they all must rhyme!. 2-- Write the last two lines!. The last two lines are nine syllables (whew!) and the sixth through eighth syllables must be the words you used from lines 1 through 4!. In any order, but it has to be those words!. The last two lines have to rhyme with each other, but not necessarily with the first four lines!. 3-- Try to take a second, and vizualize your topic, and imagine that you're doing it, or being with it, or whatever!. You should do that before anything else!. Then just sit in a relaxed place, where there's not too much to disturb you, and just let your mind flow down into your arms (hopefully not literally), down to your hands, and just out through your pencil, to the creases of your paper!. It really does work! Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com Well according to Tori in the 5th line you used "trying" a syllable before you should have :D Damn, I like this! I really really do! This your poem I love the most so far! It touched me, I breathed it in, and it stayed upon my heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, the Tyburn gator says you have it right and also delightful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think the intent of the form is to tantalize with the first four lines then satisfy with the last!. These were both very nice!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com Stop dangling these styles in front of me!!!! You have me beat in this style, and the Diamante!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |