I have not tried one of these in a while. Its called a "Geom" or "

Question: I have not tried one of these in a while!. Its called a "Geom" or "Picture Poem!." This one is!.!.!.lame!?

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Geom I
by TD Euwaite

I
seen
The grey white shape
Steely eyed fish swishes by
in the surf, he trolls for his breakfast
Surfer dudes on a platter, with red gravy
Seal a meal, yum…………!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I, I, I,
I watch them
Salmon and otter………………!.!.!.I, I, I,
For his delight as he bites bites bites
The smart fish school you
Dry am
I

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No, I can totally see the shark!. The fact that the I in the first line and I in the second line are leading back to fins that you cannot see is elusive and quite clever!. I love this, thank you!. Excpet maybe the surfer dudes on a platter with red gravy line!.!.!.verrrrrry visual, in a visceral way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I bet this stupid AY box won't let you do anything really worthwhile for a Geom

I've just had a notion - if you do the word 'surf' in capitals it becomes the eye of the dog!. What do you think!?
Or maybe the word EYED even better, eh - albeit a trifle high up in his head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

to be honest!.!.i can't see the dog haha!. it was a shark from the first look!. agree with Elaine - the "red gravy" is very visual!.
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got the picture of the dogfish TD!.!.!.!.!.and i simply love it! ha haWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like your dogfish!. A snoutzer!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I still don`t know!. Woof WoofWww@QuestionHome@Com

I've been wondering how to do this!. There was one about an advertisement in Oh What A Tangled Web!.Www@QuestionHome@Com