What do think of my poem?

Question: What do think of my poem!?

In Grey

The city fillings
Stuff
The continents;
Its thick leavings
Ooze
To the sea!.

The dark sky !. !. !.
Heavy:
A sheet of rusted metal,
Flaking bit by bit
To the ground!.

Pilgrams roam
To the last tree,
Preserved in glass !. !. !.
To ponder
Its usefulness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I love this!. You did a great job with imagery especially in the last two verses!. I really enjoyed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Worlds Oldest Tree,
Bristlecone Pine Sacrificed!.
Science learns its age!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's not bad!.
But I think you should use words that get a litte deeper into someone!. I love poems that just make me go whoa!.
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