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Question: Please can you tell me if my love poem i made is ok!?!?
Being single is not all it seems,
A partner in life is who we dream,
Some one whos there who you can say you love,
The one person you can turn too in times of need and trust!.

Just let me say one more thing before i go,
I hope your listerning so i hope you know!
Love is not easy to find,
No,
Just relax and take some time,
and sure enougth you will see,
Love will find you just remember and

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is really good!. It is pretty much the truth about things to!. Glad im not the only one who thinks that way!. :] Keep writing, your great at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Run it through a spell-check before handing it to her!. I liked it but I got stuck on the "I hope your listerning" part!. You want her to like the poem!.!.not blink, reread the same line a few times and chuckle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah Its alright!!!!!!!!! *grin*Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its nice!. Very encouraging to to someone that might be lonely!.

Keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com

the first part is a little veuge
but it gets really good!

:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats perty cool!.
i woulnt have been able 2 do that!. WowWww@QuestionHome@Com