My poem called White Hunter please comment its only small?

Question: My poem called White Hunter please comment its only small!?

Its only a small poem i did quickly, please comment though :)

White Hunter

Sunken depths of darkness
Stalking, surviving, savaging
Stale flesh from pale white bone
Striving, swimming, starving
Soul white hunter luring of blood
A shadowing, striving, shark!.

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i liked it!. i thought it was deep and very well written!. please keep writing for us!. and add more!. i look forward to reading it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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