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Question: A little slice of hellish fun!!!!!?
Fire!.
A blade of wind hit my cheek,
A deepened violet my skin did turn,
An orange flame my heart did seek,
But hell released that day to burn!.
A brown and green rustle up high,
A white knuckle was scraped,
A pulsing red through a vein,
A woollen head was now capped!.
A tarred flooded jungle,
A splash of soles did plop,
A soaked man stood still,
Not one has a solid mop!.
A revelation in droves,
A hardened soul now beat,
A heart broken by season,
For want of a glowing hearth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Very descriptive!. Thought provoking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good Morning!
Nope! Don't wanna be that person, just passed through a storm, but, I'll take the sole with lemon and butter!. This sounds like "Survivorman" on a show that went wrong!. And, how can anyone survive on just one roasted scorpion for 7 days!? I digress!.!.!.!.
Cryptic, enigmatic, easy meter, easy flow!.!.!.but I'm not awake enough to grab the meaning!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fantastic, simple, rhyming is exceptional, flowed beautifully, I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it's pretty good!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com