Is this a true Tyburn poem?

Question: Is this a true Tyburn poem!?

Is it permitted to use participles, which are actually part adjective and part verb!?

A New Day

Poking
Toking
Choking
Croaking
See his poems poking toking fail
Rotting now in choking croaking jail!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yes -- it is a perfect Tyburn poem!.

This link is to instructions to write a Tyburn poem:
http://www!.wikihow!.com/Write-a-Unique-an!.!.!.

These are the basics:

!) Write the first four lines!. The first through fourth lines are 2 syllable words that describe whatever your poem is about!. They all have to be different, and they all must rhyme!.

2) Write the last two lines!. The last two lines are nine syllables (whew!) and the sixth through eighth syllables must be the words you used from lines 1 through 4!. In any order, but it has to be those words!. The last two lines have to rhyme with each other, but not necessarily with the first four lines!.

3) Try to take a second, and vizualize your topic, and imagine that you're doing it, or being with it, or whatever!. You should do that before anything else!. Then just sit in a relaxed place, where there's not too much to disturb you, and just let your mind flow down into your arms (hopefully not literally), down to your hands, and just out through your pencil, to the creases of your paper!. It really does work! Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You couldn't find an easy one!?

I'll be back!.!.!.Cheryl Wazzername's example is strange, and her tutorial doesn't make sense, but, it can be done!.!.!.

*****
Sir Mort
by TD Euwaite

crusted
rusted
bented
busted
Primed for war, Sir Crusted—Rusted nigh
Flings his arrows, bented busted fly

*****

I interprit his peom to mean the Federal case starts tomorrow!.
Looks like he made bail!.

Granny, it's a hippie slang for smoking weed!.

EDIT: Elaine's lost her gourd!.!.!.'ben ted' and 'bus ted' don't rhyme!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

8 words out of 16, that rythme and are used again!.!.!.there is something to be said for the last two lines!.!.!.!.!.first words in each!.!.!.!.see rotting!.!.!.!.last words in each!.!.!.!.!.fail jail!.
Ya know, maybe switch these last two words, and it becomes a sentence, of sorts!.!.!.!.see rotting jail fail!.
I dunno, just woke up!
I like what ya'll are doing!.!.!.disciplined exercises in words and formations!.!.!.!.of meaning and rythme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Throwing down another gauntlet!? I don't know what Tyburn is other than the salesman at the carlot burning his ugly green and purple plaid ty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I trust you for having written a true one, although I am not familiar with the form!. I really like it, and it reminds me of something and someone!. Not sure though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes you have wrestled the gator Tyburn and won! You may now join Biscuits and GrannyJill in the awards ceremony!. I am sure there will be more wrestlers trying today!. Is this what is called a virtual poetry slam!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it and the reference is unmistakable!
Poor Granny, trying to catch those bugs with a roach clip! (I can just picture it!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is this me being an Anglo-Saxon but what does 'toking' mean, pretty please!?
And I really cannot imagine to whom you refer!.=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this alot Elaine!. Is someone 'CROAKING' I hope not!.
I hope everyone is OK!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beats me!.!.!.appears to be!. Don't know about using participles, Biscuits didn't exactly say that!. More research is needed!.!.!.but you seemingly did one!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i thought you did a good job!. the rhyming was creative and so was the theme!. very nice, keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is nice and thanks Elaine!.!.!.!.you are teaching me new lessons!.!.!.!.!.passing double acrostics, triple acrostics, i am here at TyburnWww@QuestionHome@Com