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Question: New poem!? Kind of dark!? Do you like!?
She runs away,
knowing he is never
far behind!.
He will follow
with his hateful
words and
crushing blows!.
She has become
but a shadow of
what she
once was;
a gaunt shadow
of radiant life!.
She risks a
glance back and
sees that he is
almost upon her!.
Suddenly he is there,
beating,
smashing!.
She knows these
wounds are too
much and
feels her lifeblood
becoming one
with the earth!.
Death circles closer
and suddenly bears
down upon her!.
JOLT!
She wakes up,
slowly realizing
that it was all a
dream!.
What is life
but a dream!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
it is dark, but who is a poet but one who is willing to be dark!? :) i love it!.
keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, this is not dark!. this is more like a littloe bad dream!. I do loke the way you put it together!. Either write evil and dark or don't!. Its really very simple!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is very intense i really like it,,,,maybe you should get it published!you must have had something happen in your liife to help you write that maybe not but it is way aws0me!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LIKE IT!.ABUNDANT EMOTIONAL AND POETIC IMAGES!.IT IS NICE FREE VERSE!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW Dark, but um, yea, Dark,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com