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Question: Love poem for school!?
Hey, I have to write a love poem, but I suck at writing poems! They all sound really cheesy, but here is my lame attempt!
Please give me hints :(
FLAMES
One look grabbed my attention,
had me dazzled!.
Ripples of connection,
caught me in a trance!.
A dark cloud drifted!.
Across the sky
a glint in the distance,
like gold!.
Between us,
sparks fly through
heated rage,
ruthless with my heart!.
If I get too close
tears will stream
my buckets full of sorrow
will lessen your burn!.
Flushes of red,
replaced the shivers!.
The shine turned matte,
slowly taking me over!.
A sudden realization
my senses escaped your grasp!.
Your passion burnt to
ashes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
if this is one of your "sucky" poems your other ones must be amazing i wanna read em! but dude i loved every bit of that poem!. i had to read it like three times!.
beautiful words, beautiful form, beautiful poem!.
*hint hint* (it was not cheesy) keep writing =DWww@QuestionHome@Com
You posted this before and I told you it was pretty good!. No need to change it or add anything to it!. It's what you can write, not what we can help you with!. Your teacher is going to love it so don't worry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
hm!. i dont like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i suck at writing poems
so yea i think it good lolWww@QuestionHome@Com