she—cat liver haver
locked in his room
dead he’s been
dead since noon
maggot—meal man sandwich
stench of you
oozing goo
you balloon
beetle—eaten halfway
still you move
undead unbled
unkilled youWww@QuestionHome@Com
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locked in his room dead he’s been dead since noon maggot—meal man sandwich stench of you oozing goo you balloon beetle—eaten halfway still you move undead unbled unkilled youWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Are you into Dark poetry!? This is more than a little dark!. It's very descriptive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com okay !.!.!.!.!.!. I am still feeling a wee bit queasy here with this little ditty ! But I must say it has all it needs to be a great write it's quiet ingenuous really !.!.!.!. very imaginative two thumbs up !Www@QuestionHome@Com AHHHH haaaa HAAAAA haaaaa !. clunk/splat !. !. !. there it goes again!.!.!.! It's Class!.!.!. Keep them coming!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I really liked it!.You described it to the t and your words fir it so nice!.!.Great job!.,Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice~!Www@QuestionHome@Com This is very good!. Is it written for someone special!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |