IS this a good poem for a young poet???

Question: IS this a good poem for a young poet!?!?!?

Soft hands
Gently brushing
Past my lips
Cold fingers
Gently reaching
For something
Unmistakable
But not there
Smooth wrists
Never knowing
What would
Go wrong

i dont really know i not sure if it makes sense it does for me nut i dnot know if it will for other poepleWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

OH MY GOSH! that is so good seriously! It makes perfect sense!.!.!.i might have interpreted it wrong!.!.!.sounds like its definately about a bitter sweet make out scene in which the woman knows that the relationship must end but the man is blissfully ignorant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds familiarWww@QuestionHome@Com

Perfect!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm!.!. sounds more like its a sentence or two!.!. but yea, it's pretty good =PWww@QuestionHome@Com