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Question: Mass transit poems!. How is this!.!?
"touch"
Think about you, night and day,
the first time you said my name!.!.
Mouth drops open, words come out!.
this what love is truely about!.
Your skin it grows so very pale,
lips so red, a chery veil!.!.
Hair hangs down in tiny curls,
teeth as white as ocean pearls!.
I want you now, right now then!.
I'd marry you, it's not a sin!.
A promise made, your dad, a vow!.
waited so long, won't break it now!.
I reach out, your face to touch,
you are so real, I feel so much!.
Million thoughts run through my brain,
can't wait till our name's the same!.
Now the time has come so real
no more time we have to steal!.
Our life our love, reduced to touch,
our lives in Denver, mean that much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
awwwwww! thats beautiful!! I love the way you maintain darkness!.!. but make it so perfect and beautiful! fantastic!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is soo sweet! im jealous! i want my special someone to write me something like this! wow!.!.!.such deep meaning and so sweet and awww i can't stop repeating it in my brain! very good job! i hope you continue writing and definetly post again so i can read it!
congratulations on such amazing talent!.
xxWww@QuestionHome@Com
That was really beautiful!. I was worried for awhile!. 'LIPS SO
RED A CHERRY VEIL' My favorite verse!. Things will be Ok!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Whoever you dedicate that, must be one lucky woman!!! Is fantastic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love it!.!.!.!.!.whoever you r writing to!.!.!.!.!.i'm pretty sure she'll appreciate it ALOT!.!.!.!.gud ending!.!.!.makes it memorable!.!.!.(xp!.!.!.!.lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com
NICE AND WARM EMOTIONAL IMAGES!.GO AHEAD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Annudda StahWww@QuestionHome@Com
Very well written
I give ya a 10
out of 10!.
I'm waiting to hear
your next poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com