This is a poem tell me if its good?

Question: This is a poem tell me if its good!?

the world

The world is like a vacuum
sucks you in to everything its about
You can get good things from the world !.!.!.
as well as bad!.!.
so choose carefully !.!.!.!.
cause what you get is what you get !.!.!.
and you will not ever loose it!.!.!.

the world has many,many,many opertunities
great big ones
as well as small ones
all the world has to offer is not just good
nor is it just bad
the world is a combination of bothWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is awesome! You are talented, amongst your joke and poetry talents, and im sure that you have other hidden talents that all of us would love to discover! Goodluck, and yes, the poem was great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice ideas, not totally horrible!. But!.!.!.you're spelling IS a little off!. I'll give you kudos for your ideas and meanings, but you need to work on your actual portrayal of your poem!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

She speaks the truth! But, if I were you, I would do a spellcheck on that!.!.!. It is pretty good, but definitley needs some work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its kinda simple and immature!.
there are many like this poem!.
u need to spell better!.
its good but its not original and creative!.
keep working!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

KEEP WRITING AND READ A LOT OF POETRY!.YOU WILL DEFINITELY PROGRESS!.I WISH YOU THE BEST OF LUCK!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is a really good poem!.!.i really like it!.!.keep working on them though!.!.!.wish you the best!.!.!.good job i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com