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Position:Home>Poetry> I need some poem ideas??Question: I need some poem ideas!?!? I want to make a poem for my mom and it needs to say I'm sorry I can't be as good as you want me to but i try as hard as I can I want you to know I am still your little girl and will always be!.!.!.!. the problem is that i am terrible at makin poems so if you could help that would b great!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Who's the one who stood by me thru all my strife and joys who's the one on all my birthdays loaded me down with toys Who's the one who gave me rides to friends and school and such who's the one who's my constant rock and who I love so much It's you mom, the center of my life even when were not so close I want you to know that I'll always be your girl In my life, you mean the most I love you mom with all my heart even when I'm spreading my wings I'm sorry about the trouble I've caused but it's about you, my heart always sings!Www@QuestionHome@Com In my opinion (and there are people who disagree with me), the most important part of a poem is to have really strong images!. I would reccommend that you think about physical objects that remind you of the ideas you want to express, and to be as descriptive as you can!. You'll also want to read it out loud to yourself to check the flow and sound!. I hope that helps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You expectations are out of reach, No matter how hard I seek, I try to learn what you try to teach, But I come short, week after week!. Right now I'm like an oyster, Looking plain to the naked eye, But little do you know, A pearl is nearby!. If you give me time to grow, There's only one thing I can guarantee, I am your little girl, And that I'll forever be!. Here is just an example of something you might do!. I'm not sure what kind of help you wanted, but the most special poems are the ones that come from the heart!. Let me know if I can do anything else; jlbrown6@gmail!.comWww@QuestionHome@Com Yep, I agree with elven!. Good thoughts, imagery, etc!. also, metaphors are good sometimes, unless you're just trying to get out and say it straight!. But make it come from your heart!. Don't be bound by trying to make it a specific certain way, just make it how YOU want it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lucid baubles on a painted string - echo the people passed !.!.!. It's' our lifetime set in cast!. Children now wear them just for fun , in an ancient playground , called Washington!. HaPPY bIRTHDAYWww@QuestionHome@Com |