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Question: Do you like my nude poem!?
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Lost Goddesses
by TD Euwaite

I heard a voice
Amongst the noises
Clear message
In the forum
As the Senators
Rambled on and on

A claim of notice
Full and focused
Our fallacies
…in motion
Memorandum to
A goddess
Hear him speak…

“We’ve lost Minerva
Shamed Diana
And poisoned Cybele’s water
What kind of father
Has Caesar become!?”

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What do we know of lost Goddesses!. We who are mortal how do you love a Goddesses!. The one I loved was not a goddesses loved me back!. I like the poem and I see political remarks within!. May the Missouri always flow east!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love the poem - but I'm too uneducated to understand the references fully!
As usual a consumate performance of alliterative, rhyming skills!. voice/noise - forum/on notice/focused !.!.!.!.!.forum/focused, even
full and focused/fallacies - alliteration
I know you know this, TD, I'm just pointing it out to your readers!
(Reenie - there you go, starting a poem again and not finishing it -don't go back to bed - tell us more)Www@QuestionHome@Com

There's more to this than meets the eye, to coin a cliche!. Leaders are not always responsible for their subordinates!. Or, to coin another cliche, the buck can't always stop here if the leader does not know what is going on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hilarity and beyond! (I had a VERY hard time typing "hilar-it-y, TG for the "it:")! Any-hoo, just lettin' the dog out and thankin' The Almighty that the house next door is vacant! YIKES! And Brrrr!.!.!.!.Back to bed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Certainly a great poem, one that touches on some of the conspirators' reasons for murdering Caesar!. I'd love to see more history in contemporary poems!. Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I thought it would be rather hard to shame Diana!. Ah, well, and losing Minerva!.!.!.baaaaad news friend!. Caesar was always a neglectful father, hence the whole assassination bit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bring back the Greek gods, I say!. Diana was beautiful!. I want some goddesses dammit!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love the goddesses!. nude or not!. so, yeah it was a nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its a good poem, i dont get how its "nude"!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

N - E -Double K - I - D !.!.!.!.!. It just sounds good to say it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com