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Question: I have the Double Acrostic bug (as Siren would say) how do I stop!?
They Blame Me

Telling me my own doom
Occasion for a crime
Random glance like a nova
Turning me to filth benign
Under some regret am I
Run over by the sun
Egos closing, smothering
Dirtied by their righteous reasons

It even kinda rhymes… don’t know how though… Siren is to blame for this! I swear I need to have a talk with her some day!Www@QuestionHome@Com


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This is really good, kind of dark and tristful but very well done!. I can't even pick favorite lines without paraphrasing your entire poem, it is all so consistently thoughtful and eloquent!. It is amazing that such a meaningful poem is also a double acrostic!. That doesn't stand out overly much!.!.!.!.testimony to the wonder of the work!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't think there is a simple cure for this virus!. The only thing one can do is ride it out!. I think you've done that thus far, and rather well I might add!.

I read this first thing this morning while my immune system was weak!. Now, I got it!. Thankfully it doesn't call for the use of tissue paper, just paper -- and pen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You listen here buddy, no one is going to have a talk with me!.!.!. it was all KB who got this bug rollin', talk to him!.!.!.

As for your poem, better than mine, but I have noticed every good poet says that!.!.!. It was true and tried!.!.!.

Tortured Meanings seen clear!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazing, and yes, started by the King of Biscuits, long may his inspiration reign!. This is beautiful and I had to double check and double check to make sure that you had spelled it right!. Thankfully, you had!. Love you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Brilliant!. Yes, it does kinda rhyme! Why don't you join Elaine P and me and try to create an actual double rhyming acrostic !.!.!.!.!.if that is possible!.
No wonder my hair is turning grey!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol!.!.!.!.!.the caught the bug huh!.
It's good!.
I like it!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is really a great and smooth poem' and i liked it so much!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com