Mothers Gift
Golden eyes fall
About the mothers chi
In some solemn grief
Another gift of life
This is the shortest poem I have ever written…Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Golden eyes fall About the mothers chi In some solemn grief Another gift of life This is the shortest poem I have ever written…Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Short, sweet, scintillating expression of your unique major poetic themes!. (Too many adjectives, but this poem deserves them)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Short and ever so sweet!. There is dichotomy in the third and fourth lines( grief and gift of life) that is forordained in the second, "the mother's chi"!. But my favorite line is the first, so sensitive and contemplative!. This is really very beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Gaia Fife, the song of Mother Earth!. I love the mourning as a new life is brought about into the world, a little bit of grief, but the celebration of the gods as golden eyes fall for a lingering moment about the earth!. Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not for me!. Acrostic: a composition usually in verse in which sets of letters (as the initial or final letters of the lines) taken in order form a word or phrase or a regular sequence of letters of the alphabet SamWww@QuestionHome@Com I can just hear you saying that out loud, "This is the shortest poem I have ever written," and I LOL At your hidden humor!.!.!. You seem to be doing better with subtlties!.!.!. I love it! Thank you for writting this all for us!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com They are addicting!. I can tell you are having some fun with these!. Gaia, Mother Earth, giver of life!. Very lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com GAIA LIFE!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it, though I have never personally written a DA!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I liked it it's short sweet and powerful!.!.nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |