Your opinion please.?

Question: Your opinion please!.!?

I strayed into a dream and saw
the radiance of a woman!.
A queen, ordained to stand at
my side, equal in all things!.
I saw my wife, and her beauty
was above all other women,
and I loved her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is so lovely!. I was captured by the first two lines, so beautifully written, and went on to read the rest of the poem in awe of your poetic prowess!. Any woman's heart would melt to have this tribute written for her!. Your wife must be very special to inspire such a poem!. She'll love this!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds a bit male chauvinistic to me!. You are first and your wife is equal to you!. I understand this is a concept difficult for the older generation to comprehend, but we women are not "equal to" anyone!. We are "partners with" our spouses!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Opinions are like a bum, everybody has one, and they usually smell!.
Nevertheless, here is my opinion:
I think it quite a well done tribute to an obviously great wife, and she should love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

equal in all things!?
things isn't good words to describe quality
and last line doesn't fit it says you love her because she is best of all!. but you must say either that you love her inspite of anything or you lover her thats why she is best of all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like!. Only critique would be is that the flow on line 6, at least for me, seemed off!. Perhaps something such as "was above all others,"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

fabulous! marvellous!.!.!. great! wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Structure is well! and the rythem is great too!.theme and message is all good:DWww@QuestionHome@Com

Your wife would love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She has been chosen by the best!. Who could ask for more!? I'm sure she is happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it's niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

whats the question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com