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I’ll be on the sand of the seashore
Kicking the ocean’s water
Making scars across the sand
To quench my anger
And you will know that it is I
When I see you
Walking gracefully toward the sunset
Upon the murky blue

My darling must have looked so lovely then
I know you thought of me again
Again
Again
Not even to look behind - no not you
Whose heart was the home of a love so true

I kick the water, but then you whisper – oh!
So you reached out to tickle my toe
And I know you want me there
With such great love commingled fear

Now I traipse toward the old ship wreck
Wondering just how far you slept
My teardrops fall with morning dew
And all lost in the sea with you
Oh darling you have done this too
A bond of love for me and you

So you call and I cry
I say ‘I come’ and know I lie
I’ll be by the seashore darling
I’ll be by the seashore kicking that water
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
great poem wonderful jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

1-10 1200000000000000000000000000 billion this is amazizingWww@QuestionHome@Com

excellent poeme 10 out 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

out of 1-10

9!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com