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by Elaine P Tomorrow will be a day of trust Returning to the quid pro quo Every poem gently falling manna Around the poets' shattered hearts Songs will resound as they sit On the floor of their communal dome Never again will any be deleted!. I will try to make the next one rhyme!. Now, I just need to know if I've done it correctly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is acrostically acceptable, but has its weaknesses!. 1 - Quid pro quo obviates the need for trust!. 2 - If their hearts are already shattered, manna won't help!. Of course, I am probably missing the entire point of the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's more than acceptable!.!.!.It's brilliant!. I love the "Every poem gently falling manna" Very descriptive!. Treason Toasted!.!.!.perfect :) Today is a day for doubles and triple!. I just did a double too ;) I love how we all tend to inspire each other!. What a great group of poets!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I do not know the official rules but!.!.!. is DA the order of the day!? If so, I am feelin' lucky!. I would love to try my hand at this!.!.!. If the rules are to make a lovely poem and be acrostic on both sides then, yes, you have done brilliantly!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes!.!.!.!.!.!.!.it is acceptable!.!.!.!.and you have done it excellently!.!.!.!.it is a big task to pick up words and order them inorder to get a meaningful poem, and you have done it with ease!.!.!.!.!.!.it's good and well written!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, I see treason toasted!.I don`t seem to be one the same page as you guys!. Liked the poem a lot!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, correctly! We (collectively) have indeed introduced May Day to Acrostics!Www@QuestionHome@Com Well done!. Well done!. That is a double well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com If treason toasted was your goal, I'd say you did very well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |