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Question: Is this poetry!? Is it any good!?
Could you help me make it better!?
I sit upon this windy shore!.
Salty air I inhale,
into my nose,
into my mind!.
Waves perform
a graceful dance!.
Water crashes
angst released,
upon rocks
of a million years!.
Intoxifying beauty,
sweeping emotions,
regretful tears,
enchanting laughter,
the sounds of my Earth
I recall in my mind!.
Why, I wonder,
was I so blessed!?
Placed upon
a beauty as
vast and astonishing
as her!?
Am I worthy!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A very beautiful picture I have in my mind!.
If more people pondered their worthiness in comparison to her, maybe we would not mistreat her as we do!.
Lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, you/it are worthy, I agree lovely, picture painted words,
I especially liked, "Waves perform a graceful dance etc!. "
(could even be a mermaid)Www@QuestionHome@Com
AMAZING! seriously this poem is soo beautiful
its free verse- poetry that doesnt rhyme, but still poetry
my absolute favorite kind! GREAT JOB!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think it is poetry, and good poetry at that!. I would know, I write poetry all the time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com