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Question: A poem for Silver Bells (Jay) - Can I lay it at his feet!?
Trying to walk in his shoes
(The title was Paradise Found - but the poem took its own path, and now it doesn't seem right!. Any ideas!?)
A garden wherein I may walk,
A loving friend with whom I'll talk!.
A sanctum from all worldly woes
Encircled by the rambling rose,
Whose thorny hedge keeps all at bay
Mankind, the beasts, the birds of prey!.
Our thoughts and words on Jay will dwell
Whose soul is pure and far from hell!.
Hark the sounds of lamentation
Soulful tin-tin-nab--u-la-tion!.
Silver bells that tell of yearning
For love's path that has no turning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I dont know what to say!.!.!.I am speechless!.!.!.and only my tears can answer this!.!.!.and that they do!.!.!.
lay the poem not at my feet granny!.!.!.but place it on my hands and bless me!.!.!.your blessing shall prove the most invaluable and shall guide me through the realms of life and poetry!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Jay is one of those almost unreal, unbelievable people!. When I finally talked with him, I found another angel walking about the halls of Yahoo!
For me, he is the best second-language English poet I have ever read!. I believe a book of his poems, in his country, would be considered a national treasure!. I am working in that direction!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com
beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com
How about something like "Silver Bells Ring!?" The verses are beautiful and pure as the heart of Silver Bells!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am so impressed!. This delightful verse rolls off the tongue so smoothly!. It is lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Garden Olden, Greenest Sanctum
You have found a kindred spirit for you style of verse!. Well spoken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is a beautiful tribute for him!.
I like the title Elaine suggested!.
Or maybe Sanctum!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Perfect for Jay!. He was one of my earliest contact here last year!. Such a fine young man!. I can't find other people around my age who writes excellent poems such as his!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
A garden wherein I may walk,
A loving friend with whom I may talk!.
A sanctum from all worldly woes
Encircled by the rambling rose
I peer over the thorny hedge on my toes,
The hedge which keeps predators at bay
Mankind, the beasts, the birds of prey!.
Our thoughts and words on Jay will dwell
Whose pure soul in paradise does dwell!.
Hark the sounds of lamentation
Soulful tin-tin-nab--u-la-tion!.
For the long lost object of eternal love
Silver bells that chime yearning
For love's path that hath no turning!.
Ever following the flight of love's DoveWww@QuestionHome@Com