A re-submission of a recent posting - Bogart. Better?

Question: A re-submission of a recent posting - Bogart!. Better!?

"Here's looking at you, kid"
(Those words from so long a go)
"You know how to whistle, don't you
You just pucker up your lips and blow"
How I wish we still had films like these
Not the ones which show you it all
Full frontal, writhing, on top of the bed
Instead of the quietly shut door!.

I want black and white stories
With no bedroom scenes
A shy glance beneath lowered lashes
And Bogart's fedora
Tipped back on his head
With Lauren reaching up for this kisses!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Here's looking at you too! Very nice!. As I read line 6: do you need "it" before all!? Seemed more natural to me to read without "it"!. Your line 7 would it be bed or beds, since ones seem to be the noun!. If it is plural, would it not also read better without "the" before beds then!? Minor points at best from a most enjoyable read!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is wonderful!. As I said at the first posting, I have a TV (telly) channel that plays old black & white movies 24/7!. They are a joy to watch!. There are no computer generated tricks, only good acting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is great! I am only 22, but I have always preferred the classics over modern movies!. There's just something so classy and elegant about the old black and whites!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Methinks you'd rather have the clean magical mystical sex RATHER THAN the laying it out right in front of you sweating drooling heavy-breathing kind!. WELL DONEWww@QuestionHome@Com

Enjoyed them both! Ah!.!.!. those were the movies! Pass the popcorn, please!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think I like the first one the best!.
I like this one too though!.
Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com