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Just a ragamuffin, always seemed to rain!. Every drop i cried, innocecnce still died!. It once was so clear, no reason left for sin!. Dreams i seem to set side, corrupt immpurity!. I was just a mystery, So deep down inside, love and hate, feel the sane,' nothing to explain!. Forget those awful years, Hellish memories!. I think and still I wonder, whats become of me!. You screwed me over nicely, terror in my heart!. Never ending hunger, The eternal flame!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is what I look like!. Ugly, huh!?Www@QuestionHome@Com The dichotomy of jaded innocense makes this very intriguing and moving!. The words present a vivid picture of the hungry, terrorized "ragamuffin" that goes straight to my heart!. Wonderful writing from the endless rain to the "eternal flame"!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Oh yeah, For some reason I love the verse,'LOVE AND HATE FEEL THE SAME' I totally believe in that!. I have felt both sides and sometimes you can`t tell the difference!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yep!. Love it!.!.!.! http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!. Deep feeling in it!. Nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com You did good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |