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Question: Help!! with poem!!!?
my hw is 2 write a poem about anything i want
well here it is: P!.S plz tell me anything thats not in the right place and i know this isnt a good poem but im not so much of a good poem composer ne wayz so here it is:
Friends:
Fun and Crazy
and always there
you can tell your secrets
and they wont share
with anyone you dont want them to
They're there when your sad or angry
as well as happy or joyful!.
friends are the best and
will always be there
i know its a very bad poem so i need your help fixing it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You could do:::
Fun and Crazy,
Always there for you,
Someone to share your secrets with,
Knowing they won't tell if you don't want them to,
They are there when you are happy!.!.!.and there when you are sad,
They stick around though the tough times,
When your mood is good or bad,
Best friends are the best and will always be there,
To lend a helping hand, to listen, and to care!.
I hope that helped!. I tried not to change it to much!. remember poetry is an art that involves self expression and it doesn't 'suck' if it comes from the heart :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Friends are the best and will always be there
And family too, because they truly care
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i agree with Kendra!. as long as you really mean it, it cant be bad! try to get into it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com