A poem. Comments please!?

Question: A poem!. Comments please!!?

I thought I knew who I was,
But I lost myself in you,
So i searched around for a long long time,
But it's unclear what is true,

A flower doesn't bloom in desert sun,
Nor floating lonely in the sea,
And yet I swim, wade through sand,
To find that flower: me!.

Some comments would be nice! Feeling a bit emotional today and first time I've sat down and started writing poetry, so any comments would be nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's a sweet, sentimental piece, I like it! I love the concept of the flower, it seems very abstract, but very real!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, very expressive and touching!. There is true talent in there!. I'd suggest to continue writing!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very sweet and touching- i love it, great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i can barely understand it!.!.!. but its good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com