It seems a bit "wordy" to me - but does it work, do you think!?
He’s been ignoble whenever he’s hurt
Selfish whenever he’s lied
I’ve known the desperation that is his
I’ve seen it embed itself within his eyes
Disconnected and dissolute
These things that he has been
Yet he who I knew and what now he’s done
Is the true disconnect in him
We shall not walk away, nor move
Judge him harshly, nor despair
I began his friend; hope to end his friend-
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