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This land is your land
This land is my land
So what has happened
To my lovely island!?

For now I wonder
As I sit and ponder
How to pay these prices
Will I go under!?

Under these spacious skies
Is government telling lies
From shore to crumbling shore
What schemes will they devise!?

I’m glad I’m leaving
This Earth I’m heaving
And now I’m off to Mars
And I’m not grieving!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Do you really think that going off to Mars will solve the problem!.If millions accompany you, you will still have to set up some form of government!. Having done so don't you know that all through the ages power has corrupted!. Within fifty or so years you will have created that which you left!. It is the very nature of man to dominate other men!.
Far better to stay at home and try to make the necessary changes!. Though in all the history of mankind I only know of one people who have succeeded, and that was Enoch and his people!.

A thought provoking poem though Elaine!.

RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wait, do you have room for me on that spaceship!. I promise, no tears here!. And together, on the red planet, we will live in harmony, all poets, free from government and more importantly, free from gas prices!. This was beautiful Elaine!. As for what has happened to your lovely island!.!.!.the second law of thermodynamics, unfortunately!. Blessed be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a very good poem Elaine!.!.!.!.!.very well written!.!.!.

and the following lines are my favourite!.!.!.
"Under these spacious skies
Is government telling lies"!.!.!.!.

most times, it has been so in my country!.!.!.lots of corruption!.!.!.

and the last four lines are lovely written!.!.!.
"I’m glad I’m leaving
This Earth I’m heaving
And now I’m off to Mars
And I’m not grieving!."

they are so sweet and musical!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mars awaits, and yes, we will go at a price, but we will pay it, and then we will be glad we did!. A freedom to write and commune together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Every word so true, true!. I always believed there was an
after life!. Maybe It`s Mars!. Even though I don`t like morning,
I loved your morning song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was just reading a article about some Hawaiians who are occupying a traditional Hawaiian palace in protest of the way that the US government annexed the island, this poem has a creepy resonance with that story!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Indeed!. Crumble, crumble little shore!.!.!.I'm not paying one cent more!. Conniving, devising, analyzing!.!.!.Phyddle styx!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Under these spacious skies
Is government telling lies
From shore to crumbling shore
What schemes will they devise!?

Very VERY well said!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am working with renewed fervor this morning!. I have been slacking!. It is on me to make us all make it!. I believe that, always have!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sad, but true!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.seriouslyWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Did you mean morning or mourning!? Or both!?Www@QuestionHome@Com