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Question: Last of the nite!. I'm exhausted!. How is this!.!?
"drowning in my own tears"
Stealing my heart,
Burning my love,
Ripping my soul,
Black mark that means,
Dead and gone!.
Mercy on me,
Cruel awful dreams,
headlong in disgrace,
Painful to behold!.
I can but weep,
hole in my soul!.
Drive me to distraction,
swallow my hopes!.
I am now lost,
her kiss is death!.
The moon's dying light,
waiting for me!.
So far away,
like a faint light,
Of a frozen star
My love is asleep,
A dried leaf has settled,
On icy marble,
like the cold breath,
Of a winters eve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Superb DP!. I see you are now editing on your own!. No excess words - just precise and meaningful words driving home a message!. Well done my friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You could use this as a song!.!.!.it is very descriptive and it could be a strong song !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
good !.!. sounds like a nervana song or alice in chains!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like itWww@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats deep !.!.!.good morning to uWww@QuestionHome@Com