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Question: A late nite poem!. How do u like it!.!?
"happily ever after"


Courageously we walk,
hand in hand !.
Far from human kind!.
Beyond the illusion,
of the sum we are!.
Inquest for a reason!.
United by
soul and blood!.
Fusion of
thoughts and flesh,
Together we are one!.
Truth for ever ours,
Absurdity,
Nothingness!.
Against weakness,
we fight,
no values, no ethics!.
Nihilism be
our guide!.
Chaos just
revealed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's rather superb!. I enjoyed it, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good mystic !. NOWORDS TO COMENT EMOTIONS !.

we can comment on words and not feelings sorry

this is supposed to be in your diary and not innnnnnnnn!!!!!!

plse dont post your feelings in poetic forms!!!!!

let poems be of natural form !.Dont make it man made by writin g your subconscious's thoughtsWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's a good attempt! You're not far from'Perhaps the plaintive numbers flow/For the old unhappy far off things and battles long ago'Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it!. It fits!. it really fits!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful and imaginative!. I used to write poems, like 6 years ago!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was surprised how it took a turn at the last third of the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't follow what goes on after "reason!."Www@QuestionHome@Com