A darker poem. Hope u like it.?

Question: A darker poem!. Hope u like it!.!?

"crossing over"

Hell or Heaven!?
I know somethings
there!.
Pleasure or is it
pain!?
I thought life was what
that entailed hurt!.
Then I entered death,
felt the torture start!.
Death is more than pain,
body screams insane!.
Considering this hell,
pain and heat I dwell!.
Offer for the master!.
The one who is
in charge!.
The one obeyed
on earth!.
His servant I will be!.
In hell I burn to see!.!.!.
Pain that I deserve!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

omg I love it!! LOL I think I know exactly the cough cough type of moment you are having!! LOL its fabulous!!!
YOUR bruciata angelWww@QuestionHome@Com

As do we all!.!.!.!.!. sometimes the darker side of life needs to be displayed, not dwelt upon!.!.!. many live in daydreams and butterflies, while all well and good there are two sides to every coin!. Just as long as we know that we each have the potential to be joyful, I say, write on in your darker side!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have you ever had a near-death experience!? What type of death do you speak of - physical, spiritual, emotional, intellectual, etc!.!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love the whole poem!. You do not deserve to be In such pain!.
Nor do I!. I totally believe In the after life!.''BODY SCREAMS
I NSANE'' unbelievable!! I have been In that kind of pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Email me!. I want to talk to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes sad and touching!.!.!.be hopeful God is great!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com