A lunchtime poem. Enjoy and comment in between bites of food.?

Question: A lunchtime poem!. Enjoy and comment in between bites of food!.!?

"without"

My soul needs a fountain
your love eases my thirst!.
I remember silence,
words never spoke!.

Dying plain and shallow,
against oceans tide!.
Drowning in moonlight,
dreams from our hands!.

Life's made me strong
no one left to blame!.
I look at myself now,
can you take my place!.

Without you, all turns to black!.
Apart from everyone,
in body and mind!.
I'm lost in time, the astral space!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I loved It all!. All the words are great!. But, 'DYING PLAIN AND
SHALLOW'!. OMGWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. Especially how the speaker is telling the person they can't live without them!. Great job and keep up the good work Dark Prince!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

me too! i'm without!. you go boy!Www@QuestionHome@Com

midnight enjoyment!.!.!.nice writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

honestly it didn't do much for me~Www@QuestionHome@Com