A poem for lots of us. How do u like this.?

Question: A poem for lots of us!. How do u like this!.!?

"win, place, show"

What else do I
need to do!.
What else can I say!.
Trained myself to love you,
you don't look right at me!.
What have I done to you,
tried so very hard!.
You tossed me aside,
the symbol of my passion,
that fills your eyes and ears!.
I was just so distant,
placing second in your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Lines:
1&2!.!.!.!.!.!.maybe 'What else can I do!.
3!.!.!.!.!.'what to say!.
4!.!.!.!.!.bring 'you' down on a line of its own!.!.!.just that one word
7!.!.!.!.!.find other words for this line!.!.!.meaning
8!.!.!.!.!.another word for 'tossed'
9!.!.!.!.!.'the' not needed
11!.!.!.!.'just' not needed

And you're off to the races with this one!!! LOVE the title!
Merrily, merrily, merrily!.!.!.life is but a scream!Www@QuestionHome@Com

First off I love your poem as always!. But this Is for Angelina
You bother anyone again I will hunt you down like the DIRTBAG you are!. I am a private investagator and I will track
you and teach you how to behave on this site!. We are sick
of you people stomping all over our hard work!. If you can`t
make a decent comment then move on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Iloved this poem and think it's really great !.this angelina needs to get a life ' by the way where are your poems edit angelina ' oh you can't write or read oh well it figures!.If you don't like a poem get the hell off to the jokes where you came from !.,!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

a win with this one!. place this one on the shelf of love!. show this side of you more often!. I take the line, Trained myself to love you, as learning to summit to your lover!. young people haven't gotten this far yet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dedicate my answer to angelina;

upon my demise
take the pennies from my eyes
buy some supplies
to attract flies
When there are many
send to angelina!.
is this bad enough!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This has merit and interesting in its setup!. "Trained" would not be my choice since it seems so harsh in talking about a person, obviously an animal no problem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is the sweetest poem everWww@QuestionHome@Com

>!.> depresses meWww@QuestionHome@Com

cute poem indeed!.!.!.good work steve!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

aww its such
a tuching poem it
makes me want to cryWww@QuestionHome@Com

oh no !.!. u people will never stop bothering me by this bad poem !!Www@QuestionHome@Com