Just began this one, any suggestions to make it better?

Question: Just began this one, any suggestions to make it better!?

Moon Ring

You halo
So brilliant this clear, star-crisp night
Shimmers in unreal colour,
A mirrored angel’s grin with
A thousand facets—
I marvel at the simple complexity
The simple complexity of your
Echoing circle
Your gaping maw
Your crown of enchanted silver

So many interpretations occur
To this simple man
Standing here
Now
Diminished to a speck of dust
A mote unseen
Beneath the moon tonight
And her crown of vicious beauty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Ah, the radiance of who's beauty!? A thousand facets may be on the cliche side as is speck of dust!. I liked " a mirrored angel's grin!." Overall, I don't know on this!. But that is just my opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I answered this once and AY ate my reply!
star-crisped!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.star-crossed (like a half-remembered echo)
facets - mm, not sure of this
simple complexity - can there be such a thing!? - is it one of those oxymoron thingies!?

I think the second verse should be

So many interpretations occur
To this simple man
Standing here
Now
Diminished
A mote unseen
Beneath the moon tonight
And her crown of 'victorious' beauty

victorious because she wears the crown of beauty (the victor wears the crown)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry but this is for angelina !.You are a hateful little dirt bag!.
You have been reported many times!. I have commented
on all your hateful answers!. Especailly toward Jewish!. People!. What a sad person you are!. I have been asked by many people to come after you!. I am a private investigator
and will gladly do this to get rid of your nasty mouth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I, too, question vicious!. Unless, you are using it as in fierce - which infers intense!. Or perhaps you are thinking of the slang version, which means wonderful!. But, I don't believe you are!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's beautiful, but I don't understand why the moon has vicious beauty!. What makes it vicious!? :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

the best suggestion is to STOP writing poem again ,, simply because you are not a poet , and likr that i can say that you will never beWww@QuestionHome@Com