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Question: Can someone check finish limerick poem!?!?!?
I need to finish the last line it has to be 8 - 10 syllables and rime with spain !. here it is

There once was a young boy from spain
Who was into video games
He is worst in class
So I kicked his ***
Now he has lots of pain (need to replace this line with 8 -10 syllables)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
"He's now in a hell's worth of pain!."

"He can't walk without the help of a cane!."

"Because that's where he keeps his brain!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

There once was a young boy from Spain
Who was just into video games
He was the worst in the class
So I kicked his dumb xxx
Now he lisps in Castillian 'bout pain

The other lines were edited to make them agree with the normal number of beats expected in those lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There once a young boy from spain
Who was into video games
When his xbox broke
His heart ran into a world of pain


altered it a little bit but!.

hope you injoy ( thought your teacher wouldnt like *** in his poem)Www@QuestionHome@Com

How about this!?

There once was a young boy from spain
Who was into video games
He's the worst in class
So I kicked his ***
And now he's in a lot of painWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it shattered his brainWww@QuestionHome@Com

and now he is in immense pain
and blood started to pour out of his vein
haha thats all i can think of!.!. hope i helpedWww@QuestionHome@Com

so he ended up in lots of pain!? !.!.!.!.!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now in pain, he walks with a cane!? that help!?i always hated limericks xDWww@QuestionHome@Com

now he has got a lot of pain

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