i'm lying here,
sipping my beer,
flavored with my tears!.
i'm lying here,
Accompanied by Fear,
The sound of Death is all I hear!.
I'm lying here,
hoping you'll be here,
saving me,
Before my heart is seared!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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sipping my beer, flavored with my tears!. i'm lying here, Accompanied by Fear, The sound of Death is all I hear!. I'm lying here, hoping you'll be here, saving me, Before my heart is seared!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The whole effect is dark but I can sort of understand what you may have been implying by it!. That you are lost and lonely with out her and that perhaps she is the light that fends off the Death that you feel so close when she is not!. That is my interpretation and if it false then I apologize!.Www@QuestionHome@Com hmm i think its kind of depressing but mention thats what would happen to you if she wasn't there! that would be GREAT cause it is really depressing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Morbid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Bitter Sweet~ She must have broken your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is really coolWww@QuestionHome@Com its good!. sweet but depressingWww@QuestionHome@Com its really sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com Kinda depressing!. What effect were you going for!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |