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Position:Home>Poetry> A Poem - The Sweetest Air Breathed, the Martian Saga - Do You Like?Question: A Poem - The Sweetest Air Breathed, the Martian Saga - Do You Like!? It appears, the atmosphere
is more congenial than once perceived Domes become dismantled and the sweetest air is breathed The moons brighten the sky adding to the sun's luster and welcome The spin slow, unhurried offers life's reflection Gardening and poetry are but two glorious gifts of pleasure Turquoise roses and prose guiding work and leisure Yes, the correct choice was made from Earthling to Martian population People live together with one flag, one nationWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ***** You, my dear, have made things clear Unsmogged the true blue atmosphere You speak of things as though you know How this river ebbs and flows I worry when you stand alone Forsaking crown and royal thrown I know you'll smile and remain chipper As soon as I help you with that zipper!.!.!. hehehe *****Www@QuestionHome@Com I love everything about this poem!. You made me get teary because it sounds so beautiful and peaceful!. I would love to live in your Mars!. The line "!.!.!.the sweetest air is breathed" is just lovely!. also, being a rose freak, I'd love to grow turquoise roses and be a gardener on Martian land!. One flag, one nation, AND the right to maintain our own spiritual identity :) Beautiful poem in concept and form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow!.!.!."Turquoise roses"!.!.!.!?! Clearly an extra-terrestrial flower!. Such an interesting metaphor!. I mean of course roses comes in various colors but the poets from Earth normally refer to "Red roses" in their poems!. Weird and unique, aptly chosen for such an "exotic" escape island like the Mars!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com it is very nice!.!.!.!.i love the way you treat your themes!.!.!.there is a considerable stop of breath in between every stanza and that gives the reader a while to pause and think!.!.!. "gardening and poetry are but two glorious gifts of pleasure" these two are brilliant lines and are universal!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, this will happen!. Believe it or not, NASA is already exploring ways to terraform Mars!. However, I fear we will have to live in our domes for a while before the terraforming is completed!. Beautiful poem, with a wonderful concept of "one flag, one nation!."Www@QuestionHome@Com A nation of poets, makes perfect sense to me!. The air of freedom, the air of art and inspiration to be breathed and enjoyed by the masses!. This is a beautiful work to yes, the correct and perfect choice!. All follow Marguerite, raise the flag and sing the anthem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like the structure of this poem!. You did a great job! Maybe you might want to read some of mine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes i do like it niceWww@QuestionHome@Com So, you don't suppose we could stop at Venus first!? Great images, great message, well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |